A Beautiful Place.

Ming Chuan University
Mei-Ling Liu/Sandra Liu
Time: 65264-Thu 20:30~22:05

Presentation:

A Beautiful Place

OUTLINE:

Paragraph 1: Introduction
I think we all have a beautiful place in our mind. I have a wonderful place that made me happy a lot of times.
Paragraph 2~7: Body
Writer using four “I used to go there to ---”To show why he is so love this place, and it's so beautiful to him.
Paragraph 8 : Concluding

Thesis statement:

This place is meaningful to me because it is part of the county I loved, is part of the county where I grew up and is part of my childhood.

Topic sentence:

I have a wonderful place that made me happy a lot of times.
I found one in a hill in the back of the town.
These kinds of places are meaningful to people because they are natural and people can be there alone, away from their everyday life.
That place was part of me.
During winter time my place was still beautiful.

Supporting ideas

I used to go there to sit down on a rock and watch the town and my trees.
I used to go there to be alone or to dream with my eyes open admiring the blue sky to the cloud.
I used to go there with a reason or with no reason at all
I used to go there even in the winter to play with clean snow.

Concluding Sentence.

I really hope that the new construction will spare this place and others like it, for these are the places that can bring us happiness.

SUMMARY:

The essay is talking about the writer's hometown. because this place is part of his childhood and teenage, because this place is one of the few friends he had, , because it was so meaning to him, he has a lot of good memory during this time so in his mind this place is always beautiful, natural and peaceful.

Concluding.

This place is far, far-away in time and space, part of my childhood and my adolescence. It means a lot to me because it is beautiful and natural, is a clean and quiet place in a world of noise and dirty air. This place is maybe beautiful just in my mind, but it is one of the few friends I had, back in Romania. I really hope that the new construction will spare this place and others like it, for these are the places that can bring us happiness.

REFERENCE:

http://www.123helpme.com/view.asp?id=13194

http://www.123helpme.com/view.asp?id=17165

A Beautiful Place

A Beautiful Place I think we all have a beautiful place in our mind. I have a wonderful place that made me happy a lot of times, many years ago. But sometimes I think that I am the only person who likes this place and I'm asking myself if this place will be as beautiful as I thought when I will go back to visit it again. Perhaps I made it beautiful in my mind.

This place is meaningful to me because it is part of the county I loved, is part of the county where I grew up and is part of my childhood. This place is in the country in an old region named Appalachia, a small piece of the Appalachian Mountains, in a town named Pikeville.

Pikeville is a polluted town because of the coal industry. People live in apartment or condominium buildings because of its little space available. I grew up in one of the many buildings in Pikeville admiring from my bedroom window the beauty of the mountains, always exploring with my eyes the forest or the meadows, looking for a clean and quiet place. And, I found one on a hill in the back of the town. It is about 100 feet square, it has seven old trees, wild flowers and a lot of bugs and ants during summer time.

I used to go there to sit down on a rock and watch the town and my trees. There was a very old tree, a maple tree, with a huge trunk. The others were smaller, three in the back, three on my left side and the old maple tree on my right. There were flowers, many kinds, white, yellow, purple and blue. It was nobody's place. Nobody owned that hill, but it was beautiful and peaceful and I dreamed many times about a white house over there. I think that, these kinds of places are meaningful to people because they are natural and people can be there alone, away from their everyday life.

I used to go there to be alone or to dream with my eyes open admiring the blue sky or the clouds. I liked to go there to lay down on the grass, listen to the wind, kiss the flowers and watch the leaves moving. It was hard to go up the hill to get there, but I wanted to see everyday my seven trees, to see how the color of the leaves changed and to feel the softness of the grass. I used to go there with a reason or with no reason at all. I knew that I had to be there to forget who I am, to breath and re-feed myself with hope. That was the only place I could go to dance, or sing, or cry. That place was part of me. The wind was part of my breath, the leaves were part of my song, the flowers were part of my purity and the trees were my friends that I used to hug every time when I got there.

I used to go there even in winter to play with clean snow. In my native town, even after a fresh snow, we got a gray-black layer of soot over the snow. All the town was covered with dirty snow. During winter time my place was still beautiful. My trees had branches full of white, heavy snow. The flowers, the birds, the grass were gone, also the rock I used to sit on was hard to be found, but it was still peaceful, quiet and especially clean. The snow angels I made kept watch over this natural splendor.

This place is far, far-away in time and space, part of my childhood and my adolescence. It means a lot to me because it is beautiful and natural, is a clean and quiet place in a world of noise and dirty air. This place is maybe beautiful just in my mind, but it is one of the few friends I had, back in Romania. I really hope that the new construction will spare this place and others like it, for these are the places that can bring us happiness.