Wednesday, November 30, 2005

Problems With my Neighbors

Ming Chuan University
宋雯晴 Sunny Sung #4
TIME: 65202-Th 6:30~8:15
Presentation- 12/01/2005

Classification
Source of material: http://www.essaylib.com/library/essay/101425.html
Group to be classified: Neighbors
Basis of classification: Problems
Controlling idea: 3 + different problems + types/kinds neighbors
Classification: My neighbors can be classified into three types with the problems. Which are
unfriendly, dirty, and noisy.

OUTLINE
Title: problems with my neighbors
Paragraph 1: Introduction-
How are your neighbors with you? You are lucky if they treat you as a member of their family, but what about if it is the contrary? What about if they treat you as a thing not as a human? If this is your situation, I know how you are feeling, I have had to deal with their unfriendly, dirty, and noisy way of living.
Thesis statement: My neighbors can be classified into three types with the problems. Which are unfriendly, dirty, and noisy.

Paragraph 2: Boby
Topic sentence: My neighbors are very unfriendly people, and that is why they are hated.
Bridge: During the day when I see them, they do not say hello to me.
Example: Sometimes, I try to have a conversation with them, but they always ignore me or give me a cold look.
Restatement: Sometimes, when they are playing in front of their house, my neighbors come out and tell them to leave using a filthy language that scare my children.

Paragraph3:
Topic sentence: The awful thing is not only that my neighbors are unfriendly, but they are dirty, too.
Bridge: During the week, they often throw their trash in front of my house.
Example: Although, whenever I see it, I always clean it, but later they throw more.
Restatement: Why do not they care about it? How lazy they are! Perhaps, they do not know the meaning of the word gclean.h

Paragraph 4:
Topic sentence: The other thing that makes my neighbors mean, besides being unfriendly and dirty, is that they are very noisy.
Bridge: 1They have three children and the smallest, the baby, is the one that makes all the noise during the day and they also have one big dog that barks all the time.
Example1: He is always crying because he is hungry or because he wants something.
Example2: The other day I was going to study, but then it began to bark, and thanks to its harmful noise, I could not concentrate on what I was doing.
Restatement: So the loud music and the strange noises from the drunken people begin at noon and end at midnight.

Paragraph5: Conclusion-
To solve this problem, there is only one solution and that is to move out of the neighborhood, but should we do this?

Summary:
This article classified the neighbors with three problems. First of all, my neighbors are very unfriendly people, and that is why they are hated. Second, the awful thing is not only that my neighbors are unfriendly, but they are dirty, too. Finally, the other thing that makes my neighbors mean, besides being unfriendly and dirty, is that they are very noisy. In conclusion, my neighbors are inconsiderate people, who do not care about others. They just care about themselves, and do what is best for them.

Essay
Problems With my Neighbors

How are your neighbors with you? You are lucky if they treat you as a member of their family, but what about if it is the contrary? What about if they treat you as a thing not as a human? If this is your situation, I know how you are feeling. I know it because I am living this kind of life. In other words, I do not get along with my neighbors. From the day I moved into my house, I have had to deal with their unfriendly, dirty, and noisy way of living.
First of all, my neighbors are very unfriendly people, and that is why they are hated. For example, during the day when I see them, they do not say hello to me. Sometimes, I try to have a conversation with them, but they always ignore me or give me a cold look. Since the day they ignore me, I began to hate them for being the way they are. In addition, my neighbors are not only mean with me, but with my children, too. Sometimes, when they are playing in front of their house, my neighbors come out and tell them to leave using a filthy language that scare my children.
Second, the awful thing is not only that my neighbors are unfriendly, but they are dirty, too. For example, during the week, they often throw their trash in front of my house. Although, whenever I see it, I always clean it, but later they throw more. They are irresponsible people who do not care about others around them. Moreover, their yard looks like a jungle with empty cans and bottles and other trash among the big grass that is growing. Why do not they care about it? How lazy they are! Perhaps, they do not know the meaning of the word gclean.h
Finally, the other thing that makes my neighbors mean, besides being unfriendly and dirty, is that they are very noisy. They have three children and the smallest, the baby, is the one that makes all the noise during the day. He is always crying because he is hungry or because he wants something. Why do not his parents try to lull him? Besides the baby, they also have one big dog that barks all the time. For example, the other day I was going to study, but then it began to bark, and thanks to its harmful noise, I could not concentrate on what I was doing. Moreover, every weekend, they are always having a party at their house. So the loud music and the strange noises from the drunken people begin at noon and end at midnight.


In conclusion, my neighbors are inconsiderate people, who do not care about others. They just care about themselves, and do what is best for them. They do not realize how much damage they are causing by doing the things they do. Their unfriendly, dirty, and noisy way of living brings me to that conclusion. The worst is that I am not the only one who is suffering, but my whole family. To solve this problem, there is only one solution and that is to move out of the neighborhood, but should we do this? Is this the only solution we have? What should we do?


Reference:
1. http://www.essaylib.com/library/essay/101425.html
2. http://essayinfo.com/essays/classification_essay.php
3. http://www.wow-schools.net/Split_Shot/resources/readings/annoying.php

1 Comments:

Blogger Abbie Grant said...

I am completely agree with fact that this article classified the neighbors with three problems. First of all, such neighbors are very unfriendly people, and that is why they are hated. Second, they are dirty. Finally, the other thing is that they are very noisy. In conclusion, your neighbors are inconsiderate people, who do not care about others. They just care about themselves, and do what is best for them. write essay

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